I Am the Night

I Am the Night

A Book by Steven Cash
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MOX NOX—I Am the Night

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© 2012 Steven Cash


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Wow! Its so suspenseful! I love how you ended it with a question, great job Steven :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Y'know what, I just might do that. And message you when it's up
Speak in Silence

11 Years Ago

okay, thanks :)
Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

No problem
made my heart race as i read it! good job

Posted 11 Years Ago
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TLK
Interesting use of second-person, which is a really difficult one to use. The reader has to feel a kinship with the second-person character to 'possess' the character as they read it.

"it fills you with a strange feeling of ecstasy" is an excellent line which rewards careful readers who have got that far.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank YOU for getting that far
wow! Tense - graphic and a unique perspective. Well penned

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

thank you thank you
i like the short sentences--how you deftly throw them out like bullets, building suspense. like how it reads like a story/poem combo for me--enjoy all the line breaks.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, un-named person lady. :) lol

Seriously, I appreciate it. Thank you s.. read more
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AE
Wow... O.k. You just put my imagination on over drive. That's really good! I like how you put everything in second person.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank you Amber. BTW send me a friend request
wow! dramatic and disturbing ... congratulations its excelent! It's a good prologue.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank you Hannah
I love the way you end the story.
Cool but quite brutal.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thanks Lara

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 Added on August 18, 2012
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