Shine

Shine

A Poem by Steven Cash
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Yes, I doesn't really rhyme

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Pretty girl with the pretty smile
Such a personality
Such a joy to be around
Never be afraid to shine

Never let em tell you that you aren't good enough
You are perfect
Just as you are
Never be afraid to shine

Who cares if you aren't skinny like the rest?
Sexy is skin deep
Beauty is from inside
Never be afraid to shine

Life may be hard and guys may be rough
Don't let them define you
Never give up
Never be afraid to shine

© 2012 Steven Cash


Author's Note

Steven Cash
It doesn't really rhyme, but it's good.

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it has a very lyrical quality, if it could be improved at all, i would suggest playing with the spacing, punctuation to improve the way the words are delivered

i'm glad that it doesn't rhyme

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

gotcha

thanks Em
Steven, what beautiful sentiments set to this rhythmic little piece. It is very sweet. And well executed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Shelley
Let me add a rhyme to the page for you:

Don't matter that it didn't rhyme.
You delivered a great poem like other times.
The words you wrote are true.
Keep writing poetry that reflects you.
You are the one known as Steven Cash,
Keep crafting poetry and prose that is first class!

I loved the third stanza of this poem.

"Who cares if you aren't skinny like the rest?
Sexy is skin deep
Beauty is from inside
Never be afraid to shine"

Excellent work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

naw, it wouldn't make you vain

you have those pics on Youtube (yea, i checked u out on .. read more
The Refined Poet

6 Years Ago

oh I see... the videos weren't too bad were they?
Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

well, I saw the one that's on your profile. and the one about Psalms 23:4

they weren't .. read more
Poems don't need to rhyme, so dont you worry about that. It was good, keep it up :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Jolie!
It doesn't need to rhyme, silly! What a great message.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Thank you much, Meg, I appreciate it!
Gorgeous!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Thanks
Brought a smile to my face

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Glad it did
it's ok.. you makes us happy .. while reading :)
- Kuhr gred

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

thanks
This is sweet. I like it! Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Steven Cash

6 Years Ago

Thanks Jessa
That1Nerd23

6 Years Ago

You're welcome, Steven.
Love this! You really appreciate girls, huh? :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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