If I Never See You Again

If I Never See You Again

A Poem by Steven Cash
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Plug to Dr Seuss at the end

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If I never see you again
I hope the times I said I love you
Will make you know I did

If I never see you again
I hope the time we spent together
Will make you remember what you meant to me

If I never see you again
I hope you do not cry because we are over
I hope you smile because it happened

© 2012 Steven Cash


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Aw :3 so sweet! 100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


Steven Cash

9 Years Ago

thanks
"Remember me with a smile, not tears." Was what someone said to me one time, however, that was a very different situation, but this reminded me of that and was very touching to me, excellent job, I connected to this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

thanks Rachel
RachelReaper

10 Years Ago

:)
Really enjoyed it Steven! Mixing in the Dr.Seuss quote with the last two lines was a good touch. Hope to read more by you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

yep thanks
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This is great ! I totally relate

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

yep yep
This was great. I love it. I can relate a lot. Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

thank you much
This is a good heartfelt poem. I just have one problem with it. I don't want to come off as a jerk but I think the ending stanza is very cliche. Had you been able to fit this stanza to a rhyme scheme or something, I wouldn't hate on it but I feel like that last bit is just a stolen quote from someone I forget the name of. Again, I don't want to sound mean, the rest of the poem was good- I liked it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

lol a little Dr. Seuss plug
Brian

10 Years Ago

haha, thats what I thought but I didn't want to sound too stupid :) It was a good poem though
Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

lol thanks
this really a beautifully uplifting poem, more people need to see things like this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

lol yea they do
Wow, very beautiful sentiment

Posted 10 Years Ago


Steven Cash

10 Years Ago

Thanks

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