Love

Poem Three

Shy

 

Sighted

 

Stammering

 

Hello

 

Happy

 

Blushing

 

Cute

 

Boy

 

Friend

 

Talk

 

Study

 

Smile

 

Confident

 

Precious

 

BFF

 

Thanks

 

Author's Note

this one is a lil.... eh, short

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

I see how your style goes. Okay, I consider this a very healthy excercise. Camille Corbett calls it 'Word Vomit'. This also helps with quick brainstorming, because before you start an actual writing of prose/poetry, you need to scribble down the relevant, suitable, and grammatically fitting words. Just like a seashell or jasmine necklace, you can't create either before collecting shells or flowers. Very good. Keep it up.

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much

[.]

What a great description of LOVE! 100/100 :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[.]

U're welcome! :)

[David Scott]

"Cute". Hard word to define. Again, not sure why this is listed under popular poetry. I must be out of the loop about what is popular today. Not my cup...

[Steven Cash]

Okay.... this was in popular poetry?

Wow, I'm honored

[Ella]

Not one of my favourites, its still good though! I think you should change the title to friends or something like that :P

[Steven Cash]

Nice idea thanks

[Barbara Walker]

This seemed more a friendship than a couple in love. It is a bit short.

[Steven Cash]

it is

[That_Girl]

Can't tell if this is platonic or not...

[Steven Cash]

What is Platonic?

[That_Girl]

Just friends.

[Steven Cash]

oh, yes, it's that LOL

[That_Girl]

haha okay

[RachelReaper]

The girl reminds me of my friend before she met Seth, they're so cute together :D Love this one, its my favorite so far

[Steven Cash]

Thanks

[Isobella Rose]

I don't really understand what's happening like I did the other poems. Still a good job though :)

[Steven Cash]

Shy girl meets a guy and they hang out and become bbfs

she ends up overcoming shyness

[Isobella Rose]

Oh ok... I understand it better now :)

[Steven Cash]

yep yep

[Amanda J. S.]

Another good one, though I liked the previous ones better ^^

[Steven Cash]

thanks