Here Tonight

Amanda J. S. just inspires me sooo much. i am glad to call her a friend. So... well... I gotta try to keep pace at least.

(no shame. Amanda J. S. is my hero, and my main inspiration in poetry. So, I am borrowing some technique and all. Hope she doesn't mind.)

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We're two lovers in the night

Waiting on the sun to rise

We are the essence of perfection

Everything other couples have tried to be

And failed

We are

Here tonight

We are perfect

Here together

Consumed in our love

Ignited in passion

Ablaze forever

Others watch, hoping

Wishing

They could have it so good

But we have it so good

Because we have each other

Because we are perfect

Together

Here tonight

Author's Note

YEA I DID IT!

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

This is beautiful! It's so sweet and romantic!

[ForeverNever]

I like this, a nice sexy read lol :]

[Barbara Walker]

Telling it like it is with smooth flow and those lines meld together-Consumed in our love, ignited in passion, ablaze forever...nice write!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Barbara

[deepblue04]

This format is great, I love it. So much is written in such few words

[Steven Cash]

Thanks a bunch!

[JustAnotherDreamer]

I really like the style and the format of this writing. It's whimsical and cute, but the content is truly sincere and beautiful. Cookie points for you.

[Steven Cash]

I like brownies better :))) lol

thanks so much!

[JustAnotherDreamer]

You get cookies, and you like it. Hah

[Steven Cash]

I can make both from scratch lol that's just a random fact

[JustAnotherDreamer]

Hahah, same here.

[Kelsey]

While we're all handing out cookies and brownies, I could really go for a chocolate cupcake.. :)

[JustAnotherDreamer]

Mmm, chocolate cupcake and chocolate frosting? Now that I can appreciate.

[∠( ᐛ 」∠)＿]

Cupcakes and cookies you say....? OwO

[Kelsey]

Ah yes, that sounds lovely. Maybe a few sprinkles and a big glass of milk to go with it? Yum.

[Jack Reaper]

what? where??

[Steven Cash]

Yea, I could make those

Tho my mom does AMAZING red velvet cupcakes

[Steven Cash]

And yea, milk!!!!

[Kelsey]

I must say I've never had red velvet anything before. What do they taste like? o:

[JustAnotherDreamer]

It's a very specific taste. Some of the cakes are dry and crumble deliciously, and others are sinfully moist and chewy.

[Steven Cash]

My mom makes the sinfully moist ones

it has Cream Cheese Frosting too

[JustAnotherDreamer]

Delicious

[Steven Cash]

I can bake too, but she's better

[Kelsey]

You guys are making me hungry!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Haha...well done..you did it in style

[Steven Cash]

Thanks so much!

[Brielle Cartny]

Beautiful!

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Brielle

[J. Viands]

No shame in being inspired your range always seems to surprise me from horror to romance keep mixin it up man

[Steven Cash]

Thanks man!

[Ella]

I like the poem, it's pretty good but I don't know if I like the way you wrote it. I know, I know, I suck. :P Anyways, ya it's good. :)

[Steven Cash]

its ok

thanks!

[Ella]

Welcome

[Sarah G.]

Very sweet poem. Good work! :)

[Steven Cash]

Thanks Sarah

[Sarah G.]

;)