love can never be jealous

love can never be jealous

A Poem by charismalee

 

Love can never be jealous

Though it often puts on a front

Love should never be insecure

Though there are times when insecurity is what you endure

Love can never be jealous

Bogus love is always curious

Always lurking around corners expecting you to slip

Never patiently waiting

Love can never be insecure

Fake love is always timid

Always fearing that a new feeling will come and replace them

Never truly believing it holds the main spot

Jealous love and Insecure love

Never feels just right

Devoted love eventually creeps up

Insecure love whines and pouts

Jealous love puts up a fight

Devoted love patiently waits until you figure out the truth

That love is never jealous

Love is never insecure

Always Devoted

© 2009 charismalee


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Very well put... and well written. Much truth here though some of those emotions do clearly exist.. we have to quell the insecurities, jealousy and dark side of love.. by instilling hope, faith and patience.. and understand that everyone is human and makes mistakes.

Devotion is staying by your partner's side.. all words aside it is ACTIONS. No relationship is perfect.. many fall but then just like riding a bike we must try our best to make amends and correct things to heal and grow together. Bogus love will never survive.. although with two hearts coming together it requires two people wanting love.. the question we all hold is .. IS OUR LOVE TRUE? (that of course lays buried deep in every heart.. some fear it more than others.. and it can be crushing to find the other doesn't love you like you loved them if and when it ends). Hope and faith is the light we can only hold.. instilling good values and giving 100%.. great writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It is true that we destroy our love with insecurities and fear, when in fact love fearless. It is like jumping off a cliff with eyes wide open knowing there is no bottom to it. What can I review that hasn't all ready been said. Superb work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


that was sweet ..this classification of how sweet love could show or be
yes love is not jealous but time you cant help it
its never insecure but even here it could be very unsafe
its always there around the corner ,fake love ,its timid,always afraid that it could be replaced
its never sure it stand in the right place..till real love creeps up
and all other shapes could not stand a chance
love is strange ..even this classification may never hold
and everything may turn to be wrong and what we thought as unstable,could last forever
really enjoyed the witty write
lovely write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Outstanding wisdom in your poem. Love should be most precious and cherish time in a life. Jealousy only create fiction and disappointment. A excellent poem.

Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well put... and well written. Much truth here though some of those emotions do clearly exist.. we have to quell the insecurities, jealousy and dark side of love.. by instilling hope, faith and patience.. and understand that everyone is human and makes mistakes.

Devotion is staying by your partner's side.. all words aside it is ACTIONS. No relationship is perfect.. many fall but then just like riding a bike we must try our best to make amends and correct things to heal and grow together. Bogus love will never survive.. although with two hearts coming together it requires two people wanting love.. the question we all hold is .. IS OUR LOVE TRUE? (that of course lays buried deep in every heart.. some fear it more than others.. and it can be crushing to find the other doesn't love you like you loved them if and when it ends). Hope and faith is the light we can only hold.. instilling good values and giving 100%.. great writing!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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charismalee
charismalee

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I am 19 years old and I attend allegany college of maryland. I would like to transfer to st. johns university in new york city to major in creative writing. more..

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