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The monster in my dreams

is the demon inside of me

the hate and the rage

is the complexity of the cage;

my mind

burning embers, surrounding,

engulfing, choking me

i'm sorrowfully aware of the pain,

that my soul see's

please somebody.............Save me!

Author's Note

please ignore grammitcal errors

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

Most people try to ignore their demons. Embracing them helps get rid of them. I loved this poem, it was deep and sincere and it caught my eye instantly.

[Gatlianne]

A look inside the mind of a poet. How true what lies there can be. Great job.

[Wicahpi]

All I know is sometimes, unfortunately,
those demons do come to call. Chase them away!
Chocking is spelled choking if you'd like to edit.
If not, hey, that's perfectly peachy with me!
Peace n Light