Run Away

Run Away

A Poem by C. Lee Battaglia
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How I felt at the time.

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Run Away
Written by: C. Lee Battaglia


I'm going to run away,
Don't try to stop me,
I've already planed the day,
I'll pick up my things and flee,

Will you come?
That's all I ask,
I know it may sound dumb,
But it will be worth the task,

Run away,
I want you to come,
But if you stay,
Then I will hum,

I'll be back,
Another day,
I'll have a knack,
Oh when the sky isn't so gray,

I'll be there,
At your door,
You'll be there,
At your door,

For you my dear,
I'll be back,
For you my dear.
I will be back.

© 2014 C. Lee Battaglia


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I understand this poem. I'm old and I want to run away. Good thoughts and questions in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote! Such a great review!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This gave me a smile. While like most children I had considered running away, I never considered running away with someone else. Favorite line "Oh when the sky isn't so gray".

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thanks Rose! I am grateful for your review!
Beautiful! I've felt this way before.. Love is interesting xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this poem, sometimes we just want to run away with the girl or guy we love and leave the problems behind....
Beautiful poem C.Lee. enjoyable to read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thanks dude! It's true though... Haha XD
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I know right? xD haha You're welcome!
I love the form of this poem, after each verse you wait for the rhyme and there it is!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful, the flow is lovely!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

I am really not, but your work is amazing!!!
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

I think you are at least! Thanks though!
Valkyrie Warrior

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome!
lovely writing, its well placed and flows beautifully

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! I just let my emotions flow sometimes and it turns out better then I thought it would.read more
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very nice and powerful. you create impressive piece what i love read again and again. if you go back i wish you best angel above .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
C. Lee Battaglia

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Added on November 27, 2014
Last Updated on November 27, 2014
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C. Lee Battaglia
C. Lee Battaglia

Alpine, UT



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My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old. I hated reading when I was little .. more..

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