I Felt Connected.

That night felt like a dream.  (I should have left the bed.)

It was everything I wanted.

You were everything you seemed.

We played on words quickly forgotten. (By the way, your body trembled.)

The air was sucked between your teeth.

I was pleasantly set on fire. 

My soul was swallowed, with discrete. (I'd like it back, within me.)

Your tone purred against my skin.

I felt the world as one.

(I see your unfair decision, and I'll proceed to raise the question. No, I won't leave until you remind me, and make sure to explain your hand.)

Author's Note

Criticism should always be constructive. ;)