love

chelsea

If I told you I loved you,

If I told you I lied,

If I told you I was crying,

or I did not try,

would you belie me, 

would you run.

would you surrender,

or live forever.

If it was't real, 

If it was a fairytale,

would you still live forever.

I loved you then,

I love you now,

I'll love you forever 

until death due us part. 

Reviews

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I love the commitment in this poem! Your word flow is great! Nice job...keep writing! = ]

[chelsea]

sorry if you don't like it :(