My Lord, My Life

My Lord, My Life

A Poem by Chelsea
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My walk with Christ.

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My Lord, My Life

I lay on the ground

My heart shattered in pieces

I cry out in pain knowing I can’t go on

You come and break the chains off that were knocking me down

You pick the pieces of my heart and put them together

I feel your presence

All my worries are gone

I feel light, as if a gust of wind could carry me

The dark no longer lifts me,

The light lifts me

I’m a new person in Christ


Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by Chelsea

Dec 10, 2010


© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
A poem about my love for the Lord, 100% true. Reviews appreciated :)

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amen to that! when you write about your personal experiancses, hard as it may be, it comes alive and gives much stronger meaning. another good write! would like to see more of it :) dont be afraid to let go and be completely honest in your poetry, that's what it is here for. open your heart to ways of expressing yourself more. i really hope i didnt insult you by saying that. but i see lots of potential with you, as your poems are good, but i believe you can make them better. :)
i hope that helps and i havnt annoyed you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Jesus sure did smile when u wrote this!

here's the thing. there are many things about this that could be better, its like saying...."i woke up, i went to school, i learned, and i came home to watch tv" when that could be written like" My eyes were tired as i awoke reluctantly, i despised the premature end to my peaceful slumber...and so on and so on" what im saying is like, the language needs more creativity , more life, like the wolf poem you sent me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow this is really amazing! I like this alot.


Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this one a lot know where you coming from on this one....keep up the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amen to that! when you write about your personal experiancses, hard as it may be, it comes alive and gives much stronger meaning. another good write! would like to see more of it :) dont be afraid to let go and be completely honest in your poetry, that's what it is here for. open your heart to ways of expressing yourself more. i really hope i didnt insult you by saying that. but i see lots of potential with you, as your poems are good, but i believe you can make them better. :)
i hope that helps and i havnt annoyed you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Grace abounding in this poem. Delightful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hallelujah to you,
good that you found God...
this poem was simple and the message was well said...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant description of how we are changed when we turn to Him.
Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Winners have been Chosen in the Christian Poetry Contest.

The Winners are:

~ For The Best God Breathed Poem ~ Us by Tate Morgan

~ For The Best Inspirational Poem ` Little Razor Blade by jumbie's #1 fan

` For The Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by PoetGirl http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Christian-Poetry/12436/

I wish to Thank each & every person that entered the contest & ask that God pours a multitude of Blessings on each one of you!

Thanks!

Im His Daughter



Posted 9 Years Ago


This is great in my mind.. tho I would see darkness drag you down & Light lift you up.. good poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this, go beyond this... its just you and Him, no one else to consider that you and Him will be together and for that no one can touch your faith.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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