My Lord, My Life

My Lord, My Life

A Poem by Chelsea
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My walk with Christ.

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My Lord, My Life

I lay on the ground

My heart shattered in pieces

I cry out in pain knowing I can’t go on

You come and break the chains off that were knocking me down

You pick the pieces of my heart and put them together

I feel your presence

All my worries are gone

I feel light, as if a gust of wind could carry me

The dark no longer lifts me,

The light lifts me

I’m a new person in Christ


Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by Chelsea

Dec 10, 2010


© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
A poem about my love for the Lord, 100% true. Reviews appreciated :)

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amen to that! when you write about your personal experiancses, hard as it may be, it comes alive and gives much stronger meaning. another good write! would like to see more of it :) dont be afraid to let go and be completely honest in your poetry, that's what it is here for. open your heart to ways of expressing yourself more. i really hope i didnt insult you by saying that. but i see lots of potential with you, as your poems are good, but i believe you can make them better. :)
i hope that helps and i havnt annoyed you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Beautiful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great job, though, i agree with Chana Abraham in saying that you might to tighten the lines and check for grammar in the particular line. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


great write....hold to the faith ...I hear it gives wonderous gifts

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


amen... fantastic and christian

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's nice to know that God still impacts positively on people's lives.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing your spirituality with us!

Very good poem, but I would just tighten it up a little. For instance, the line, "You pick my pieces and put me together" is a little unclear, perhaps "pick up my pieces" was what you meant?

You are really on fire today, girl!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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