The Window

The Window

A Poem by Chelsea
"

The window, you and I.

"

The Window

As if you were a window, I the drapes.

Yet pull me off, as if I were some disgusting leech.

All I wanted was security.

© 2010 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
Just how I"m feeling. Please review.

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Ahh...insecurity, the feeling of being exposed to a street full of staring people, and your limbs slowly crackling with each glance, all the way to your backobone. I can relate. Brief but great imagery, it hit the spot! Keep going.

-youoweyoupay

Posted 7 Years Ago


Rather short and cute. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agree with Lily...God Bless You. *aside whisper* I think she means it sarcastically.:P It's ok...i guess.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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something many can associate with!! well written and nice imagery!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand that fully half the world feels like this...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every time I read one of your pieces on here, they get better and better with every word.

Posted 9 Years Ago


beauiful yet so sad,
do hope you're doing well. god bless lily

Posted 9 Years Ago


hi,
this is really good. Kat24

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great metaphors and well used in this sad poem that you wrote so well

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agin to short, I doubt your a person of a few words or are you?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 28, 2010
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Tags: window, drapes, disgusting, leech, security

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Chelsea
Chelsea

Canada



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