Volcano

Volcano

A Poem by Chelsea
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A poem about Volcanoes.

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Volcano

Grumble, grumble

Blow your top

Your contents slosh about

 

© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
Just a quick write. I had fun working to get the flow to work. Partially because lava "flows" so I decided this poem should have a bit of irony! Tell me what you think!

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cool work, and for all the terrors of volcanic eruptions, you sure have made this one really cute, now that's saying something! i really enjoyed this poem!! awesome!
PS: I dunno if you realised it, but you are right in a way about the "slosh" part. after all, the molten rock underneath the Earth's crust does slosh about all the time, the magma that will emerge from volcanic eruptions as lava.
good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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cool work, and for all the terrors of volcanic eruptions, you sure have made this one really cute, now that's saying something! i really enjoyed this poem!! awesome!
PS: I dunno if you realised it, but you are right in a way about the "slosh" part. after all, the molten rock underneath the Earth's crust does slosh about all the time, the magma that will emerge from volcanic eruptions as lava.
good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short, simple. Lots of hidden meaning. well done, dear sir. Ma'am. I tried picturing this with more punctuation but then realized that it'd just ruin it. The lack of punctuation gives it that sense of flowing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hurm..I guess you do like to write things that came from nature..good for you...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really short and cool!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute, very funny!

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome, could explain more than one thing. deep :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this:) a nice poem:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice, its simple, and with a bit of humor!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 2, 2011
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Tags: grumble, lava, blow, contents, slosh, volcano

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Chelsea
Chelsea

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