Mirror, Mirror

Mirror, Mirror

A Poem by Chelsea
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Mirror, mirror, upon you. What do you see?

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Mirror, Mirror

Your white handle grip me perfectly

So warm, I slide into your grip without hesitation

Without even so much as a second thought

Your rounded handles, my oh my!

I stare at a pair of eyes

Across your steamy top

They’re fierce,

Is that me?

That angry face, mine?

Your rippling top, must be lying

 

© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
I tried to write something completely out of my style. I tried to make you believe this poem was something it wasn’t. What did you think I was talking about?
Well I was actually talking about a teacup, and staring at your reflection in the tea! Please review!

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yes sometimes people get used to their reflection until one day they look and realize that the face isn't the same one they looked at years ago. people don't often realize how much they change through out circumstances and just life in general. its a hard thing to face! this showed that perfectly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"So warm, I slide into your grip without hesitation"

I like this. nice poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

impressive work, yep i didn't guess until you finally revealed it all at the end. this was another very vivid and surreal write, and it's good that you're diversifying. nice work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sweet! I really liked it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I look at my face and I see someone else. I like a old person face. Their faces can tell great stories. The poem is very good. Time make us harder and colder. I believe after a time we learn to forgive our mistakes and become human again with old age. A outstanding poem. This is the type of poem that makes you think.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

yes sometimes people get used to their reflection until one day they look and realize that the face isn't the same one they looked at years ago. people don't often realize how much they change through out circumstances and just life in general. its a hard thing to face! this showed that perfectly!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think other reviews had stated it well...


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was about a girl looking in a mirror hoping to find someone she thinks is attractive or happy, and instead she sees an angry face and finds out that she either thinks she's not attractive as she hoped, or as happy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

funny to me~!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is so amazing and I tottaly didn't know it was supposed to be about a teacup great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It left me wanting to know more about what the cup holds. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: mirror, handle, grip, hesitation, second, eyes, rounded, steamy, fierce, me, rippling, lying

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Chelsea
Chelsea

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