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Eyes of Killers

Eyes of Killers

A Poem by Chelsea
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A deadly game of two killers.

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Eyes of Killers

Stalking you

With my clunking boots

 

Stalking you

With my padded paws

 

My sight is set

Going in for the kill

 

My glowing eyes seek you

I’m ready to kill

 

Bam!

 

Meow!

© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
If anybody understands what I'm talking about, you get a million dollars! Kidding, but once again.... I'm not going to give it away in the author's note. So tell me what you thought I was talking about!
PS message me if you'd like to know my meaning!

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Aww, I have a cat named smokey and that little stinker is just how you describe..lol At night his little glowing eyes are all you see, and he will creep up behind you and just before you know it BAM!!!! he has punced on you and tries to climb up your leg....LOL This was a cool poem and very sweet!



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i dont know i give lol. obviously its not about a cat. but its cute

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think I get it
its about a human stalking someone and killing them,
and a animal stalking someone and killing them.
the type of animal that I thought you meant was a cougar, (though could be any cat I guess) because cougars stalk there prey...

Very good!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

is this like a cat chasing a mouse or something? I read it a million times to try to think of something.
So, my compliment= you've got my attention, because I want to figure it out. Great expression, and you showed the scene, instead of told. Good job:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another cool and darkly funny poem.
All i can say is, more dark stuff please.
Keep it up chels

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hi,
very interesting. Kat24

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2011
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Tags: stalking, killer, eyes, paws, sight

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Chelsea
Chelsea

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