Gun in School

Gun in School

A Story by Chelsea
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A gun in a backpack, in a school, what is to become of this?

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Gun in School

It’s my first day at college, my nails read. They are chewed in jagged patterns. Nail biting, I resort to when the nerves kick in.


I am not nervous about it being my first day at college but simply my plan. Upon my back sits a backpack. It’s black and is covered in zipper pulls and key chains. Hidden deep within my backpack is a gun.


I try not to act suspicious as I move around these innocent people. I see so many pretty faces, so many attractive faces, it’s a sad to think that I’m about to shoot and ruin them.


I think about taking the gun and burying it six feet under the ground, along with my evil plans. But no, this is just going to be way too much fun.


My buddy nudges my shoulder, our signal for go time.


I rip the Velcro of my backpack open and whip out a gun. A nerf gun. it shoots its foam bullets!


Bam! I hit a teacher. He gets struck with an orange foam bullet. Another one knocks a steaming cup of coffee upon Dale’s laptop!


I’m going crazy; I feel my control being lost. The room is a sea of orange foam pieces. Sorry janitor.

© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
A bit of an inside joke! But I hope you enjoyed.
In case you are wondering a Nerf gun is a little toy gun that shoots foam. You can buy them at toy stores for kids :)
Please review!
Oh and this is dedicated to Dale :)

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I loved this! ^.^ I love the way you talk about the gun like it's real until it gets taken out and the shooting begins. I at first expected a sad story about a school shooting.
Me and a few friends have decided that at the end of this school year or as a senior prank we will get a massive amount of people to start a nerf gun war in the school, haha.

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A very interesting read :) i enjoyed it. look forward to reading more of your work. very entertaining :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hi,
this is really good. Kat24

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This neat little story caught me out. Love the fun twist! Caught me out good and propper! LOL.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was hoping for a super soaker, but nerf will do :o) Sad to think that in today's social climate, such actions would likely get you thrown out on your ear. Very minor editing note, first line "read" instead of "red"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww, thanks you for the dedication, never knew our random conversations would turn into a pretty funny story, this made me laugh a lot:)
Great stuff and thanks again!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha! this is cute. i wonder if college students really do this stuff. seriously, do they? Lol!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow I really liked this :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i really enjoyed the ending, it was entertaining to say the least. from the beginning you set the mood as very serious and suspicous, but then it all boils down to a practical joke, awesome! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lol...I seriously gasped at the part where he mentioned ruining people's faces. Nice write! Fun fun fun.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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What a fun write =! You got me worried for a second, and soon I realize what a Nerf Gun is, which actually I don't, since I never see anyone play it>< It makes me laugh, really, evil plan? Ha, what a fun plan! I bet the teacher is mad at you >< Ha!

A fun, surprising poem, i love the ending, surprising, thats what readers love! Also, I love how you told us in the very beginning like its a real gun as well!
I wonder if i ever get to play it >

Posted 13 Years Ago


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