Glass Heart

 

You can see right through me
As though I am a pane of glass
My heart races by the mere mention of you
It is the most translucent part of me
Fragile and delicate like a flower
Whose petals quiver when you are near
Pearls and diamonds could not be more precious than you are to me
Sugar does not taste as sweet as you
My glass heart sparkles and shines
It sings my love be mine
To hold me close dear
To be mine til the end of time
As tiger lilies in a valley who sway and sing happily
Hiding young lovers beneath a blanket of sweet slumber
No one could be as wonderful
Your like the calm after the storm in summer showers
That comes and leaves just as soon as it appears
Returning again
Only to kiss a flowers sweet honey petals
The love we share is pure and everlasting
Glimmer, shimmers, and shines through
Till it has reached every part,
Of our translucent hearts

Reviews

[Tuff Stuff]

Love poems! I love their meaning and warmth!
I liked how you compared your heart to translucent glass.

"Your like the calm after the storm in summer showers" Brilliant line!

This line really hit me. It was very original in an incredibly unique poem.
You did a great job with its flow.
Word usage was great and no grammar issues. Yeah!!!!
Can't wait to get to the rest of your work!

T.S

[Wildecat]

A very good write, I to can feel the warmth of this poem, a pleasure to read.

[Donald Cole]

Wow, seldom is written a poem of love, of hope, that the glass would not shatter. I always try to end my words in hope, your words display hope prominently, clear through. well done.

[Ivory]

Very creative, you painted a beautiful picture with your words. really good write : )

[Angel's Lady]

You can see right through me
As though I am a pane of glass

Till it has reached every part,
Of our translucent hearts

From the beginning clear through to the end, this is very beautifully and poetically done. Good job.

[Staci Brown]

such a pretty and warm peaceful piece you've penned here :D loved the imagery you used as well. thank you for a wonderful experience while reading your passionate words :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Bonnie]

You have used words richly in this poem.
I like the use of nature and symbols to convey the emotion and depth of meaning.

It might help the reader if you put some spacing between lines.

[Mysty Rayn]

So lovely. So touching.