You are the only one

You are the only one

A Poem by Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
"

You are my only one...

"

You are the

Only one which

Gives me everything.

Everything you have.

 

You are the one

Who shines up high.

High in the sky

And beyond my heart.

 

You are not selfish,

Giving me your love.

You share your happiness,

Or even your secrets.

 

You are always the

Only one who cares me.

You are the only one

Who loves me.

 

You are the star.

You are always the

Only one deep in my

Fragile heart.

 

© 2011 Cherry Lai^_^♥~~


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You are the star
You are always the
Only one deep in my
Fragile heart

Sweet poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was amazing
i loved the way you expressed this :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful piece! :) "You" must be a really important person to you as it shines up high in the sky and in your heart. Actually, I think "you" can be plural. In our life, there are many people who helps us, who cares us, who loves us. It's may not just be our families, our friends, our teachers, our pals...They're all the important ones in our life. Your poem can strongly tell out this point. Well penned.

P.S A sweet reminder, in paragraph 2 last line, it should be "And beyond my heart" but not " And beyoud my heart". "Beyoud" should change to "Beyond"

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Cherry Lai^_^♥~~
Cherry Lai^_^♥~~

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