Summer Holiday

I love summer holiday...

Summer is the best,really great

and go with a drops of sweat

out of your head.

 

Unique with all different kinds

of holiday,hotter and fun

with all sports.

 

Many different things to play.All

kinds of things,sports,bubbles

and whatever in every summer day.

 

Much sweat runs down to your

cheek,jump down to the bath

tub with lots of joy.

 

Everyday is different in summer.Water

splash out everywhere,wet but great

times are in our heart.

 

Rare kind of magic are spoil

everywhere.Sweet smiles are

all put on faces.Warm mood

are in our memory.

 

Happy is also one of the rare

kind of magic Imention above.Children

are all rush to the wide park.

 

"Oh yeah!' are sounded in every house.We

all love it all the times,even adults and

the old ones.

 

"Like" is not enough to mention

it.Even emotions are also not enough.What

do you think?

 

"I love it so much" is all in our feeling,

Let's enjoy the great hot day!

 

Day is now the best of summer,

sun bath,swimming or even

surfing.

 

A summer is nearly ended,

we miss the summer,but let's

wave our hands.

 

Yuck!School is about to start,

let's tidy our things and come back

school.All of us miss it so much,

but we must wait 'till the next summer.

And that's S-U-M-M-E-R H-O-L-I-D-A-Y!

 

 

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

Explode with summer fun and the rejoice of having summer holiday. A really great poem! (But kind of using my titles or words in my poem "Summer Holiday"....) Each paragragh has three to four sentences, and I think it's better if you get the words rhyme;the words can be more colorful to show how summer is fun and colorful. That would be better I think.

[Marie Harrison]

Brilliant burst of Summer Holiday!
So sad to see it go away.:(

[Jackson Lai]

Cool...