A few attempts at Haiku

Sorry, it's an addiction.

The Search

I am the cold fog
Creeping through my dark forests
Now alive again.


Drunk Again

One more cigarette
Another glass of pinot
I will not survive


Rut

Awake. Four A M
Shower. Coffee. Write, now work.
Will it never end?
 

Reviews

[Tania Leigh]

I love the first one....great imagery with so few words.

I chuckled at the second one....must just be my mood. Forgive me if it was not meant to be humorous, but with this Haiku, the limitation of syllables made the last line appear to be exaggerated in respect to the first two lines, and it just struck me as funny :-)

The third one was great too....again, amazing what you conveyed in so few words.

A pleasure to read!

[Angel Bird]

I like your Haikus.

To me the first one suggests images that are nicely creepy and I hope your dark side has gone back to sleep again, or perhaps as I see you simply drowned it in pinot and surrendered to the state of complete alcoholic oblivion, but I noticed you are already up at this early hour, looking good and very handsome again freshly shaven with the new shirt ... but still - there's a slight smell of pinot in the air!

These Haikus are great! They can stand all for themselves, and each one tells its own story or they can go together and tell an even bigger one.

Your writings are really great, for creating a whole story to the readers mind with these few words, and that's I think what writing Haikus is all about ...

Thanks for sharing your talent!