Twilight's Sorrow

Snapshot of twilight
Melding within my sorrow
Blend my life with death
 

Reviews

[Sparrow]

Beautiful words for the picture presented here and wonderful poem altogether. Thank you for submitting it to the True Talent contest.

[Frances O'Neill]

This is a nice perspection of the depiction.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

captivating i like it

[Yvonne Heidt]

Beautiful interpretation of the picture that I presented. Excellent job!

[Steffi]

I think that image really gives a great visual to what you are saying. Beautifully done!

[PhoeniX]

something about this piece keeps making me comeback and read it. truly a piece that in time i will come to understand fully. but for now, the words are beautiful

[justjenn_2u]

Sorrow in the thought of dying, I perceive. Your short poem blends well with the graphic. Good luck to you in the contest! Let me know how you do.

[Collette]

mmm. I love haiku. This one is exceptionally good, and the picture fits perfectly alongside it. Thanks for sharing!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

simple and short says it all with very few lines.. I loved this!

Great Write.