Cry

Loon cries at twilight
Alone in placidity
Cry on the morrow

Author's Note

haiku

Reviews

[maiarusm]

I was surprised. The moment I finished reading this haiku, I shivered. It is wonderfully expressive and it touches something in me that makes me feel something unknown. Very lovely.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such a calm, serene haiku - quite lovely. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Sparrow]

The picture perfectly compliments all that you wrote in this. I practically heard the call of the loon in my mind. Such a serene tone, I'm calm and sad at the same time after reading this.

Good luck in the True Talent contest, I'll announce the winners later today.

-Sparrow

[robin]

placidity

[J]

Having been born in MN, this familiar, haunting echo still remains one of my most soothing of memories ~ in addition to the drone of a high-flying small plane and the smell of freshly-cut grass. Oh, thank you so much for sharing, Damian. Wonderful accompanying photo. ;-)

jill

[Skye Jules]

Wow, that is an amazing haiku. Such small words, but such a grand message.

[Angel Bird]

Wonderful job! I like this one very much! Thumb up!

[Collette]

nothing quite compares to the call of a loon. It's depressing and beautiful all at once. I enjoy a good haiku, and you've put a nice one together here. Kudos, my friend.

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Gesundheit!

Haiku's great, and the photo is superb. Where was it taken, I wonder?

[Victor]

This is a good Haiku! I like how you used the right words to give it a great meaning! Awsome write!

~Victor