Life

Life

A Poem by Queen of Sin
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bored so I wrote this

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              Life is like a river

              flowing so free

              Life is like a flower

              always blooming

             always dying

             Life is about

             choices that you make

             Life is so much better

            with you in it

© 2009 Queen of Sin


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a very good descriptive peice with a hint of love at the end, good work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I really liked this. :D I would have changed a few things around, such as, "Life is like a river, flowing free," instead of, "Life is like a river, flowing so free," or maybe even, "Life is a river, - bla, I lost my train of thought. Some things could have just been shaped up a bit though.

I do have to say, regardless of the shape needing, this is one of the best pieces I have ever read on Writers Cafe. Very nice work. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Cheyanne and I'm 20. I spend most of my time reading. Its been so long since ive written anything and my life feels empty without it. I love walks on the beach.. more..

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