Jealousy

Jealousy

A Poem by Queen of Sin
"

...

"
   Little green monster
   they call jealousy
   peeks through the depths
   to make you angry

   It makes me angry
   this little thing
   makes me cry
   that little thing

   Mad at him
   Mad at her
   for no reason
   because of jealousy

© 2012 Queen of Sin


Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Author's Note

Queen of Sin
My emotions have to come out some way :'(

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Jealousy,can be dangerous and very exhausting. To me it's a heinous emotion. Short but to the point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


God I hate that little monster.
I agree with EMF about making it a bit longer but I like it the way it is as well :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's a beast that can cause so much pain in our lives. You try your best to control for as long as you can but eventually it may win. With that said..it can be a good emotion for us as well it's all in how we control it.










Posted 11 Years Ago


That pretty much sums it up. You have to try and not let this beast devour you. Know that each day can bring about a stronger you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
EMF
Simple and straightforward. The only thing that would benefit this work is making it longer, adding a touch of bitterness. From other works you've written you certainly have the skill. As it stands it is a good poem. It could be a great one with just a little edge to it.
Your flow and theme are strong, your language forthright. But, mine is only an opinion. Desn't mean I'm right about the edge. Personal taste is all.
As it stands, cracking work.

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

300 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 20, 2012
Last Updated on May 20, 2012

Author

Queen of Sin
Queen of Sin

Winslow, ME



About
Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Cheyanne and I'm 20. I spend most of my time reading. Its been so long since ive written anything and my life feels empty without it. I love walks on the beach.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..