further from myself

FLEETWOOD MAC. TRACK TITLE THE CHAIN.

11:12 AM 1/14/2020

Listen to the wind blow, watch the sun rise

Running in the shadows, damn your love, damn your lies

And if, you don't love me now

You will never love me again

I can still hear you saying

You would never break the chain 

And if you don't love me now

You will never love me again

I can still hear you saying

You would never break the chain

Listen to the wind blow, down comes the night

Running in the shadows, damn your love, damn your lies

Break the silence, damn the dark, damn the light

And if you don't love me now

You will never love me again

I can still hear you saying

You would never break the chain

And if you don't love me now

You will never love me again

I can still hear you saying...

 

listen to the wind blow

run in the shadows

watch the sun rise

damn your love damn your lies

break the silence

damn the dark damn the light 

- damn to be damned -

Reviews

[FaeryQueen]

And if, you don't love me now
You will never love me again

damn your love, damn your lies

Break the silence, damn the dark, damn the light

- um ok, wow! this concept of repetition just went up a notch. honestly, i wasnt too sure about using repetition as a tool in my pieces, but after reading this poem, the repetition really hit hard. hmm, im not sure if repetition would ever be needed in mine, sometimes i do use repetition, but i hardly ever need to.

-also those liines hit hard for me, those were the powerful lines for me-