Soldier

Soldier

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A diamante poem about soldiers

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soldiers

brave, fearless

protecting, defending, preserving

brave-hearts, heroes, savages, mongrels

murdering, forcing, terrorizing

evil, sneaky

terrorists

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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Your poem tells the truth. It is where you are standing. Here in the USA our Soldiers are heroes. But standing in a foreign land. The people of that country see men who want to steal and take. A outstanding poem. You wrote the truth.
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Posted 14 Years Ago


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Good call on the diamante poem! It worked really well because you had the pros of wars than the cons! It was a clever choice for sure :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is neat. Flip sides of a similar coin.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very truthful! Amazing job (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! I love this poem great job with this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Er ok so which are the soldiers, all of the above, great sentiment though

Posted 13 Years Ago


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nice play on synonymous adjectives almost - a very descriptive poem! also like the mirror reflection - the change from the soldiers into the terrorists!! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Clever and its true. You sort of wrote more than one point of view about soldiers, which is what I really liked the most about it. Nice Job :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is unique and very cleverly done...you speak with truth and wisdom...good work...

Posted 13 Years Ago


This poem is true. I like the symmetry because It really makes you question why it is that we have to go through this and where does the line get crossed. ....Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ohh I remember when I learned how to write diamonte poems last year in my english class, i love how they are!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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