Come To Me In A Breeze

A love poem.

Come To Me In A Breeze

 

 I need to feel your

warm breath brush

against my neck

tonight.

 

It's my security,

serving as a constant

reminder that you

love me.

 

You're out of

my sights but deep

thoughts of you 

run through my

mind and lay on my

beating heart this

star-filled night.

 

Your words

constantly rewind

and replay in my

mind tonight.

 

Your lusty grin

and those rich pools

of smokey eyes

make my hips want

to grind with you

all night long.

 

When the wind blows

my way, my love floats

away to you.

 

I need you tonight,

I yearn for your strong 

arms to be around my

waist, hugging me.

 

I long to inhale

your prowling scent,

I crave the hot

taste of your

kiss on my tongue.

 

Your aura I feel

coming to me in an

ocean breeze tonight.

 

Author's Note

This is another version of On My Knees with a few alterations.

Reviews

[FocusedAmnesia]

I like the way it's broken up. It kind of reminds me of the way Ellen Hopkins writes. The first and the last lines are my favorite.

[Arctic Fox]

has a lot of senses in it which is good. I suggest equaling out the stanzas and making grammatical alterations. I saw very few punctuation marks.