Desert Living

Desert Living

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A desert poem

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DESERT LIVING
 
Skeletal tumbleweeds waltz
around in aimless circles
on the dusty desert floor.
 
Gusty winter winds of the
desert beat against our
houses and moan while
continuously jangling the
wind chimes.
Leaving everyone
feeling detached and
alone in the safety of their
warm homes.
 
Something about the
desert that can leave you
feeling so desolate and
sorrowful that even the
hollow of your bones
desperately
seek company.
 
You want to just crawl back to
the warmth of your bed
and just cry yourself
to sleep.
 
Deep in the desert,
where only hardy
creatures exist,
you might go
weeks or months
without seeing
anyone.
 
Your mouth gets so
dry and parched from
the arid desert air,
and your voice
just cracks from
lack of use.
 
Eventually,
the winds
have to moan
for everyone
just to give
her people
relief.
 
The desert's
not for everyone.
 
 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


Author's Note

Marie Harrison
My experience of living in the desert and calling it home.

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wow this is very very perceptive work. you've picked a really great topic to write about here. personally i'm very astonished by all the animals that can be found in the desert, and how well they adapt. although sometimes yes it feels like a right wasteland...
kind of reminds me of a time when i was on holiday in Australia. since it was about winter, though we were in the middle of a desert it was real cold, and so there was the improbable sight of people wearing parkas in the middle of the desert, lol
wonderful work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A wonderful description. It really sets the scene.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully crafted, great descriptions.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! the descriptions here are really amazaing and full of bottlesd emotions. Really enojyed reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie, this is a fantastic write. But all the colors
of the rainbow here makes me think acid trip...
Me personally, I would lose the colors dear, You
have a gorgeous poem that can speak for itself..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nicely said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful piece.. the imagery was gorgeous, and I really liked the use of colored text.. carried the flow of your words quite well. Great job. c:

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is very very perceptive work. you've picked a really great topic to write about here. personally i'm very astonished by all the animals that can be found in the desert, and how well they adapt. although sometimes yes it feels like a right wasteland...
kind of reminds me of a time when i was on holiday in Australia. since it was about winter, though we were in the middle of a desert it was real cold, and so there was the improbable sight of people wearing parkas in the middle of the desert, lol
wonderful work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the story. Life in the desert is harsh...but the best shower I've ever had was outside in the desert. It felt like heaven. The memories...ah...

It really is hard life..but being able to watch the stars in the sky at night when there is a cooling breeze makes it all seem worth it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

I knew a girl whose dad was a interstate truck driver gone for long periods of time they lived literally in the middle of nowhere in Nevada and her story sound just like this one

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 20, 2010
Last Updated on August 23, 2010
Tags: Desert, Nature, Moody Setting, Dry, Energy, Restless, Life in the Desert

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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