Vinegar Love

An angst poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vinegar Love

Your love is

Like vinegar.

It's bitter

To my tongue,

It burns my heart,

And it pickles

My soul.

 

Your promises

Are as empty

To me as my

Bank account

Was when you were

Finished with me.

 

To think that

I believed

That you could

Spend your

Life sharing good

Times with me,

Feeling happy

And secure. 

 

That is just

As crazy as

Believing that

You could

Spin a mountain

Of manure

Into a ship

Filled with gold.

 

My ability to trust

Has been depleted,

Since all of my hopes

And dreams of building

A family with you

Have been defeated.

 

Thank God your sperm

Never took me to carry

A baby full-term. 

 

Raising spawn from

You would be like

Learning to live my

Life with my brain

Full of worms.

 

Your head

Is so huge

So bald

And so ugly.

 

The view makes me

Laugh and

Smile so smugly.

 

Let's see who you

Find to take my place.

 

Poor girl,

After awhile

She will have no

Smile on her face.

 

For smiles,

You and your

Wretched family

Will surely erase.

 

So let me move on

As quickly as I can,

Only then

I might finally

Have a chance to

Meet a real man.

 

Goodbye my love.

It was you,

Who I cherished

For so many years.

 

No longer

Will I wait

Patiently for my

Life to appear.

 

Now my life

Will take off,

My dreams shall

Take place,

And my tears

Will dry up

Like your Mom's

Ugly face.

 

 

Reviews

[No use.]

is it horrible if i was laughing throughout this poem and cringing at some points and then wanting to embrace you? haha

[Emer]

I can really feel the anger and spite that you have put into this poem. I think its the best way to have it - writing something with all of your emotions and not having to deal with them further

[MoonlightIce]

Very nice! I could feel every emotion in every word

[Poeticpiers]

I think that you are rather teed off

[whiterabbit]

Amazing, I feel the raw emotion!

[Trublood13]

Wow, this is amazing- so full of thruth and freedome- I loved it!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Fantastic-full of so much energy and, well, rage! :D A fav ^^

[.]

excellent title..Your ready to get your mojo back heh? I laughed so hard at this..brilliant

[Coyote Poetry]

Vinegar love couldn't be too good. Title caught my attention. I like this poem. Pure negative and happiness to lose some dead weight. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[BetterOff]

YOU GO!!! I totally love this... No way do you love him. He's a loser... And so is his next victim. I'm so proud of you... I left a loser in the dust at age 22... it was the best thing I ever did in my entire life. No bad genes, no right-wing Christian a*****e, no boss. Lucky U!