A First Wife

A First Wife

A Poem by Marie Harrison

A senyru





























First Wife

She was his gimcrack,

Jewel of the Nile, a king’s dream,

Once trash, future queen.


© 2010 Marie Harrison

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oooo badassss

Posted 9 Years Ago

OH THAT'S SOO COOL! I like this it's beautiful you did a nice job on it!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Brilliant~Jewel of the Nile is a lovely line~

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is a nice way to say it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This poem barely has 25 words, and yet it's so beautiful. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Great poem in barely any words. Yet the words tell it all and mean so much. Wonderful write. Your a natural.

Posted 9 Years Ago

What a lucky first wife.

Posted 9 Years Ago

From trash to Queen! I bet she's happy!! Nicely done

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Nice... Very nice use of the word, I'd say.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on October 12, 2010
Last Updated on October 12, 2010
Tags: Senyru


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

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