Razor Witch

Razor Witch

A Poem by Marie Harrison

A bloody witch poem.






















Razor Witch

Come here my sweet!

Come to my house

To trick or treat,

Nothing will beat

What I have to eat.


My face is rather green

But I’m nice to meet.

My nose is very crooked,

But my black teeth

Will widely greet.


If you are nice boys and girls

I’ll give you poison or

Candy full of

Razors to eat!


So scoot your

Feet over here

And come trick or treat

On my side of the street.

I’ll make your gums bleed

For Halloween, my Sweet!




© 2010 Marie Harrison

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I love this. It was funny and cute. I love how you portrayed the witch too. Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago

i'm sold...
sadly, doesn't take a lot when candy is involved. hahaha

Posted 10 Years Ago

Spooky and cute:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

You have some strange neighbors Marie ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

great job well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Thats was so fun to read... a very comical take on those nasty witches.

Posted 10 Years Ago

The description of the classic halloween old witch. Nice rhymings! I felt a slight itch on the inside of my mouth as I reached the last line...lol.

My face is rather green
But I’m nice to meet.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Scary for sure, think I'll stay on the other side of the street, don't trust anyone with a mean scratchy voice like that witch!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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a scary fun read!

Posted 11 Years Ago

a very fun read ..liked the detail in this too.. perfect for the halloween season..great job on this witchy write

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on October 22, 2010
Last Updated on October 23, 2010
Tags: Horror, Witch, Evil, Halloween, Trick Or Treat


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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