Razor Witch

A bloody witch poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Razor Witch

Come here my sweet!

Come to my house

To trick or treat,

Nothing will beat

What I have to eat.

 

My face is rather green

But I’m nice to meet.

My nose is very crooked,

But my black teeth

Will widely greet.

 

If you are nice boys and girls

I’ll give you poison or

Candy full of

Razors to eat!

 

So scoot your

Feet over here

And come trick or treat

On my side of the street.

I’ll make your gums bleed

For Halloween, my Sweet!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

there is no way to tell which witch is for real.There are some strange people in this world

[Jessica]

Ha Ha ! Marie Harrison, I wronder what is the idea of this lovely poem? It looks like the poem i've got in the solo speaking. kinda witchy and a feeling that I don't know how to express.
Razors in candy!! How can you think of that! You are such a genius! Now I've got one more prank to put on my annoying sister :p
Rowdy! Great! Keep it up!

[boyinblue]

haha, now this is more like it. I couldn't help but read it with a super high, witchy voice.
Really good in my opinion, I loved it's simplicity and fluidity.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i really enjoyed reading this poem, therefore it is a great poem for it has its own strenght and it is the fun factor in this poem:)

[Norma M Sutton]

Lovely . . . what a mental image lol

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The Razor Witch is evil...but quite a charming character.

[Brandon]

I have to agree with Kerwin, this was really funny. Great work, keep it up.



100/100

[Steve]

Funny!! I hate to admit it.....but this one made me laugh!

I don't know if you intended to make it funny, but it made me giggle ^_^ The idea of a witch putting razors in candy was morbid, but still funny the darkest humor haha I loved this. A great halloween poem :)

[Zyria]

Although the poem is about poisoning children, I found it humourous. I liked the use of rhyme. A very enjoyable write.