Paranormal Air

A paranormal writing.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Paranormal Air

With a slight

Chill of the air

Or suddenly

Waking-up

From the feel

Of a cold stare

 

Instantly you

Know something

Paranormal

Is over there

 

Should you scream?

Should you cry?

 

You could run

But it can 

Probably fly

 

Even if

It is silly

Give it a try

And run like

Hell

 

Before it

Lays it's

Hands upon you

Or casts an

Evil spell on

You forever

 

Don't be

Ashamed if

It whispers

In your ear

And piss

Trickles down

Your legs

Like tears

 

Even the bravest

Of men turn to

Jelly whenever a

Ghost is near

 

 

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

A good spook. The last two stanzas are hardcore. Very effective. Telling it like Vincent Price!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I'm shaking in my boots.

[RTB]

that picture went wtih the poem the part that got me is that like i love seeing or reading in a belief of something bigger than us and little stuff like this poem just gives me a happy feeling thanks for sharing :)

[Black Cat Fever]

Darkly spooky. So is that picture you have with this. A good chill for all seasons.

[Tina Kline]

Very spooky and eerie. I'd run if I wasn't frozen with fear!

[AreWeBothCrazy]

Very fitting for Halloween! Well done, keep up the good work :)

[Short.Nerd]

Lol.. nice(:

[KL]

It's great how many poems you churn out in lieu of the seasons. Helps remind me what time of year it is, haha.

[Tim]

Nicely done Marie, a good halloween poem that nerve-chilling.

[Eric Cox]

Cool chill to this. Love it. A real ghost would certainly spook. A cool write, great work.