Candy Land Dance

Candy Land Dance

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A whirlwind dance of rapture

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Candy Land Dance

As tuxedo

Licorice sticks spin

While festive red

Candy canes dance

Their twirling waltz

In the autumn wind

 

Bells of the

Cathedral will sound

As we embark on our

Dance of honeybee’s glee

 

Let’s electric slide on

Our tangy rainbow floors

Here we’ll begin to explore

Joyous rhapsody of

Gypsy folk love

 

Mingle with spider monkeys

Jive with baboon groups

Playing their bassoons

 

Let loose with kangaroos

Whistling Dixie on

Their shiny maroon

Cinnamon flutes

 

Ecstasy we’ll find

As peaceful

Music subdues our

Ire and pangs as volatile

Violins rise and fall

Within their string

And bow range

 

Hershey kisses

Will melt us

In our candy land

 

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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very sweet :)


100/100

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The images were quite interesting. Lots of energy in this poem. Reads like a fun time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love the last line! Very good. The color adds to this as well.
Now I want chocolate...

Posted 9 Years Ago


another sweet piece well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The poem is so good. Made me wish to find a band of Gypsies and listen/dance to the music of being alive. The violin is my favorite. Great description and words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a hell of a sugar rush ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


impressive imagery here, i sure loved this one! the picture at the start sure added to the entirety of this poem! great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like the tangy rainbows--a beautiful touch...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great imagery/descriptions. A really fun and surreal read. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very dreamy.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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