Open Up!

Open Up!

A Poem by Marie Harrison

A urgent poem of love

















Open Up!

Whirlwind love is at your door

Moaning, she’s stirring wanting more

Aching for you to pour, pour and pour

Gooey, sweet like a melting smore

She’s the woman you adore

Another night of Egyptian cotton in store

Howling at the moon is a folklore

But not the swirling doves of the Irish moor



© 2011 Marie Harrison

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this kind of reminds me of a carnival i don't know why but its all good :)


Posted 13 Years Ago

Very well written as usual. Really enjoyed this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Splendid Picture..!!!! Like the write too..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Love this Marie and love the picture.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Love the flow and the content very nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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You know what I'm going to say!

Posted 13 Years Ago

That was sweet as chocolate and smooth as silk. Very enjoyable read.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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this was a nice quirky piece, and perhaps a little suggestive too? haha I really like how you've extended the rhyme sound throughout!! an octave of A almost!! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Beautiful flowing poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago

You amaze me with your brilliant quirky peices. Love this!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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27 Reviews
Added on January 9, 2011
Last Updated on January 15, 2011
Tags: Love, Romance, Passion, Expression Of One's Love, Sensuality


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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