Together Forever

A poem to a man's long lost love.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Together Forever

Hearing the waves crash

Against these rocky shores

 

It’s still you that

I adore, me amore

 

You I long to see walk

Through my door

 

My lotus heart opens

To your butterfly once more

 

As I lay my head to sleep

I pray deeper than before

 

That the Lord

Will restore

 

Between us

What has been

Done and torn

 

I meet you in my sea of dreams

Caressing your angel face

 

Dressed as a princess

With the sweetest candor

You’re still the

One that I adore

 

As I walk along

This rocky desolate shore

 

Be my lover

Once more

 

Let’s be kinder to each other

Than before

 

Together we'll

Be forever,

Me Amore

 

Author's Note

A love poem to a man's lover, he can't live without her. His heart breaks each day that they are apart. He walks the lonely shore all day, thinking of his long lost love.

Reviews

[Sports Girl]

Wow that was really good. It had a very nice flow that I enjoyed and I love the imagery that you used. It all allowed me to feel what he was feeling. Great job.

[Abbie]

sad and loving again very nice combo


100/100

[Blake Q Hatfield]

I like the longing aspect in this poem. How he just wants another chance at what he now deeply misses. The loss is like a death he hopes he can wish back to life. Well done.

[al25]

To me this poem is more playful then romantic. I dont know why maybe its the way you use me amore.

[sarah]

oh my gosh I love this I love the picture I love love love this poem! great work! I love the last stanza
Together we'll
Be forever,
Me Amore

[Akshat♥]

this piece is really amazing...congrats to you for your win..
thnx for sharing it:)

[Magdelena]

Tis was beautiful me gal.. You make Amore so perfection.. Congrats to you on your win. You so deserve it..

Huggeroonies
Mags xx

[Dilan Gray]

I really love the poem, it is really beautiful. It flows very well and tells a great story that you can picture in your head.

[Sunny Skye]

Very romantic. Nice job.

[Linear]

Yeah and it gets bloody cold on that beach day after day, Great poem once again my Maria amore ;)