Making Camping Smores

Making Camping Smores

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A sticky poem.

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MakingCampingSmores

Embers burn slowly

Stories swapped around campfire

Hearts fused together

 

 

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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Nice little verse/extremely short poem?. but cool. i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Probably one of the best examples of efficient structure. So much meaning in what is "not" said. The slow burning embers imply that the fire had been so hot, much like the start of a relationship. Now like a slowly burning ember, the love burns slowly until..the hearts fused together. What an awesome piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


hey! what about the marshmallows

Posted 9 Years Ago


Real nice. Comforting poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


thbis is nice and keep up the awesome work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Brilliant.

Posted 9 Years Ago


aw short and sweet very god

Posted 9 Years Ago


the brevity of the poem makes it all the more endearing..yet you beautifully capture the spirit of campfires..bravo!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Short and yet sweet! Like Elizabeth said, it's really smart using smores.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 20, 2011
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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