Making Camping Smores

A sticky poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MakingCampingSmores

Embers burn slowly

Stories swapped around campfire

Hearts fused together

 

 

Reviews

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Nice little verse/extremely short poem?. but cool. i like it

[D.J. Lutz]

Probably one of the best examples of efficient structure. So much meaning in what is "not" said. The slow burning embers imply that the fire had been so hot, much like the start of a relationship. Now like a slowly burning ember, the love burns slowly until..the hearts fused together. What an awesome piece!

[Mauricio Montoya]

hey! what about the marshmallows

[JanieB]

Real nice. Comforting poem.

[♥(heatherawesome..]

thbis is nice and keep up the awesome work

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Lovely!

[A]

Brilliant.

[Abbie]

aw short and sweet very god

[Arabdha]

the brevity of the poem makes it all the more endearing..yet you beautifully capture the spirit of campfires..bravo!

[Alicia™]

Short and yet sweet! Like Elizabeth said, it's really smart using smores.