Silence

Nature Poem

Silence

As Magic waved her cat tail’s wand,

Sir Turtle splashed into his pond,

 

While the red robins chirped and danced,

The white tailed fawns munched grass and pranced,

 

Joy sparkled as the eagle soared,

Silence fell when the black bear roared.

Author's Note

A simple poem I thought of walking in the woods one day.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your imagery here is wondeful. A very soft, gentle, happy poem. I loved it.

[Linear]

And all the while lance continued to dance, within the dark silence.

Lovely poem :0)

[tynamite]

I love the contrast of the two lines of each verse. It seems like you're always doing the simple things in life. I love the peacefulness and animation portrayed in this.

[Darkest Rose]

Sweet and simple which made this poem all the better. I love the wording and the very end of this, and I love nature and animals so I love this a lot. Amazing write :)

[?]

Simple? maybe, but wonderful
Enjoyed this one, as I do love nature

[sarah]

This is simple but amazing! it is sweet and peaceful great write!