Shock Treatment

A mind numbing poem

n Shock Treatment

Machine guns rapid fire

Deep inside grey matter

 

Eyes twitching,

Body convulsing,

Silence is required

 

Images surfacing

Bright lights flashing

All logic is shattered

 

Tip toe as you go

Leave no clues behind

Anger will soon

Fill these synapses

 

Author's Note

I can feel a migraine coming on in my head.
Had to write this.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Perfect poem describing the onset of a powerful headache. It is like violence happening inside the head!

[Muse]

This was a cool read! And presented very well. I liked the font choice and the word play.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sounds like one of my headaches... thank God i got some Exedrin on hand.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the pain swells each line to bursting~ potent presentation!~

[emmajoy]

Grief .. Is that how it feels, how absolutely horrible, poor girl?! So hope you feel better as soon as possible.

In spite of being about the awful pain, your poem's so clever, the words are very descriptive, it's even painful to read.

[Jibey]

It hurts...