My Grief

mourning poem

 

My Grief

My companionship

Is unbearable

As I grieve

 

Forgive me

For there’s no relief

 

Nothing comforts

Or consoles my anxious soul

Everything’s a thorn in my side

My darkness I cannot hide

 

No quench for this mighty thirst

 Magic pills cannot subside

This sea of pain

That resides in my heart

 

I’m a slave of mourning

A raging storm of anger

And regrets

 

Time has been my thief

Robbing me of my dearest love

 

Throw me in

My pit of doom

Bury me deep

Within my tomb

Author's Note

Just thinking about what a bitch it is to grieve.
How it just pours out of your soul like an ocean.

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

TIME HAS HEALED .. SOME OF MY PAIN .. SOME WILL NEVER FIND CURE ...

I CAN RELATE .. JASMINE

[Chris]

We grieve over many... happenings. For some its a lifelong effort.

[Dayran]

Time as thief.....profound. It also heals.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You hit the hammer right on the nail with this poem, perfect imagery of grief!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

Your anguish and pain pours out in this eloquent piece. Grieving although absolutely horrible is a necessary part of healing. It sure is a b***h though

"I’m a slave of mourning
A raging storm of anger
And regrets"

Very passionate phrase

[sugar]

so deep and filled with emotion...loved this

[Tina Kline]

This describes grieving perfectly. A very sad place to be in but hopefully the grieving will soon end. Fantastic job!

[Sam Severn]

The anguish in your writing is so TREMENDOUS, n' so exquisitely presented, it blows me away! ㋡

[KAREN]

I really felt the pain!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Great job!
Full of deep emotions too!