Kiss o Kiss

Kiss o Kiss

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A smooching haiku

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Kiss o Kiss

Tender lips touching

Warm tongues rub

And twirl about

Passions smoke with flames

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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this is definitely short and sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very sensual and very suggestive, nothing wrong with that I mean, after all isn't that the main reason we have been blessed with life--- so that we can pass it on?

I gave it a 98% because Haukus are among my least favorite forms of poetry

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sensous, loving and hot. Sigh!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very erotic and passionate. This is really great!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sweet and passionate, and very beautiful!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such good sensual descriptions!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh yeah!

Posted 8 Years Ago


i think, like most kisses, this hauku went a bit too far ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I see the Haiku... the font breaks it apart in the available space.

I like the thoughts invoked

Chris

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2011
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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