Forever Damned

Forever Damned

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A blood splatter

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Forever Damned

Traces of your heart

Brand my soul tonight

Like a dagger

Driven deep below

Gasping for air to breath

As blood runs down my neck

One bite and

I was eternally forsaken

Forever damned

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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Loved this! The title and last lines are horribly confusng. You're trying to be mysterious, but just coming off as confusing...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You do have quite the knack for packing a powerful punch (or should I say bite) in few words!

Posted 12 Years Ago


In a few words. Told a complete story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your brevity always says so much more!!!

Lovely read...

~M.Babu~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice Marie, i would change below to into...and watch who you give your neck to ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great work here, very deep and intense. A great chilling to the bone write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Intense and right to the point...one deadly bite. Great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good job..!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


WoW! This is chilling, intense, vivid and very much to the point (or is that two points?)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2011
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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