Shedding Words

Shedding Words

A Poem by Marie Harrison

A Word Association Poem


Shedding Words

Colors twirling in the air of change

Pennies, quarters, nickels, dimes

Deep pockets produce space rockets

Their long legs and high kicks speak volumes

Bound by threads these words are shed

Rain trickles off the tin roof protecting fleshy peaches


© 2011 Marie Harrison

Author's Note

Marie Harrison
This poem was a made by a stream of relationships with words
Something new for me.

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You create some good visions with the poem. I like the flow and the powerful and beautiful statements. Thank you for the amazing poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago

love the ideal, Great job well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Beautiful...Short but really amazing... :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago

Interesting associations... and when all is shed, the bare truth is exposed...

Posted 12 Years Ago

Beauty of words nicely connected with the nature........

Posted 12 Years Ago

aaahhhh peaches, i think i might get the meaning, but maybe i dont lol, nicely written though

Posted 12 Years Ago

I need glasses and you send me this kind of slanted cursive to read... you're conspiring against me, aren't you?? Admit It!!

That's interesting. I had to read it a couple times to get how cool it was =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

"Rain trickles off the tin roof protecting fleshy peaches"

Excellent imagery portrayed in this line!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Is this a deeply profound poem by the beautiful and elegant Marie?

I fear she wrote it on the run, and is simply poking fun :0)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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interesting well

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on August 25, 2011
Last Updated on August 25, 2011


Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA

Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..


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