Lip Locking

Lip Locking

A Poem by Marie Harrison
"

wet and fun

"

--Lip Locking--

Fresh bubblegum taste

Of toxic wet kissy kiss fun

In the orange blazing sun

Warm sparking tongues slide

As exploding

Pink rocket lips collide

Oh what an electric current

Body seizing

Rollercoaster ride!

© 2011 Marie Harrison


Author's Note

Marie Harrison
just thoughts

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Love it!
The font adds to the exciting, teasing ride that the reader experiences, and I love the last 2 lines.....I'm with ya...kisses are sensuous experiences to be celebrated and long remembered......

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice Thoughts..!

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a sultry run of tongue play, words fertile display teething rings engaged to the cord strung in hypnotic stanza's of this poem..amazing stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sfunny, Trying to remember, nope can`t
remember any body seizing.
A kiss could be described as really dirty,
disgustingly depraved and hungy, but '
body seising ? Nope .
Cute story.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 12 Years Ago


"As exploding

Pink rocket lips collide

Oh what an electric current

Body seizing

Rollercoaster ride!"


Isn't it! Aww now I need to go find someone to kiss!

This was great Marie, what a way to start a Saturday!
Antonio xx



Posted 12 Years Ago


It's definitely bubble gum! A light and sensual write with good color, imagery and delivery!
WindSong

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful! I love the font and color that you used! I could feel and see everything that you talked about!

Cannot wait to read more from you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this, the font and color compliment the words so much. Nothing better than a kiss in the blazing sun, haha.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Brilliant. The color fits so well with bubble gum. I could hear lips smacking and bubbles blazing.

Kind of erotic as well. Excellent.
Very fun read too. You always make me smile and get a real good feel good feeling.

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh yes kissing is the most intimate thing you can do and the ultimate high. What a deliciouly sexy poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on September 1, 2011
Last Updated on September 1, 2011
Tags: Kissing, Romance, Fun

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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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