Canoe's

broken lives

Canoe’s

 

Only dreams of white lace

Covering my face

Ran through my brain

Seven years ago when

I booked our bridal room

When you asked to be

My groom

 

I chose a secluded place

High up inside

The limbs of soaring trees

Surrounded by chirping birds

And bright green leaves

 

Where you would

Say your vows to me

At Canoe's on the

Chatahoochee River

 

Now only rain and

My warm salty

Teardrops fill that

Vacant space now

 

God sent a flood

And washed it

All away

 

The very day

You decided

To forever

Stay away

From me

 

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Touchy and soothing work..!!!

[Doug Ordunio]

Interesting episode seemingly reality-based...thoughtful!

[Deeply Daisy]

Really touching. x

[Raven Starhawk]

Though short and phrased with delicate word play it packs a deep meaning that I grasp.

[Dream Weaver]

Heartrending for sure, sometimes it just
isn't meant to be ......

[Shep]

Very sad poem. Very emotional. Love the poem.

[Helena]

Perfectly poignant poem of love lost. Brought tears to my eyes Marie.

[KAREN]

Sad, Really an emotional write!

[Chris]

Poetic justice of a sort...

The emotion is displayed and felt throughout... and I followed like a lil lamb...

Chris

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a lovely presentation blends beautifully with emotional expression and teardrop artistry~