buzz

Inside my head.

My mind is a hornet’s nest

swarming with tainted ideas,

dreadful buzzing thoughts

armed with venomous,

dripping stingers,

tiny metallic wings slicing

through fleshy walls until

my head throbs, menacing

daggers piercing my heart

and my gut, delivering

droplets of poisonous,

nonsensical mental

ramblings that destroy

my body and spirit as

I try to fight them off,

yet they go on stinging

in a gluttonous frenzy

of systematic, sadistic

obliteration…

-CV

Reviews

[josh]

wow i could realy feel it wile i was reading

[Nameless]

this feels like it poured onto the page, thick and dripping like venom. perfect!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Sounds like my A.D.D and Bi-polar acting up to me. lol great visuals inspired with the tortuous agony of it all.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

You make this feel painful .. it is a good description of the need and want to write and also a little bit of a depression for me .. good images, love all the word play..

Chloe
xoxo

[Kris Tate]

This is good, I love your imagery and the simplicity of it

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i love this... fantastic write!