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We're all just mildly twisted!! Okay maybe severely!

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A twisted mind

With twisted images

Twists a pen

Forming twisted words

Into twisted verse

Causing twisted thoughts

To twist out of control.

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Reviews

[NoelHC]

I often see reviewers on here that do not like the use of repetition, however there are cases when repetition is extremely effective. This short poem is on of those cases, it make your point so well.

Another great piece of writing, the way you introduced it with
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was a brilliant touch.

[Chris Micha]

Noel, thank you for that awesome review sir!! It truly means a lot. :)

[NoelHC]

Damn, the formatting didn't keep TWISTED at an angle in my comment. And my sentence should have read "This short poem is onE of those cases"

[Chris Micha]

Well I certainly got it! :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you are right .I am twisted ,you're twisted, we are all twisted lol.Very cool little poem Chris :)

[Chris Micha]

No way! I'm not twisted ;) thank you!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Says you lol.I am twisted and proud and you are welcome :)

[Chris Micha]

Haha ;)....

[Glass Heart Inc]

Congratulations *

Great poem because I believe all writers have to be a little (or severely) twisted to come up with the things they write.

[Chris Micha]

Thanks I only have a 3th grade edumacation ;)~

[Bri]

All of us have to be a little twisted to reach beyond conventional thinking and dive into imagination and emotion. Twisted and raw is how I prefer my words. Clever word play. I really like this!

[Chris Micha]

Yes indeed! Thank you Bri :)

[Zahra]

interesting. :) what's the fun without being twisted

[Chris Micha]

No fun at all :)