SEE WHAT IS WRONG an acrostic sonnet

If God's body is the universe then mine is like one of his organs, both of us sharing the skin organ at the least.

 

 

She holds me close surrounds me all the time

Every inch of my skin is touched by her

Every part of my body seems to rhyme

With every inside inch of hers I am sure . . .

Had I never read the Bible part

Attempted to understand the man’s role

They say I have in matters of the heart

I mightn’t have known we were one person; one whole!

Sure and should I ever marry I will know!

While I wait I will try to pretend

Rightly being an organ of the world though

Otherwise I have no way to comprehend

Nothing disagrees with what it tells:

God is that Being outside beyond our skin cells.

Reviews

[John Fredrick Carver]

Has there ever been such a heresy, and I don't just mean Christian but those who think the Universe is God too? Interesting but silly and fun, you think?