Letter (Please listen to the video while reading)

They say wait for it, but what if it mistakenly forgot you?

Dear Love,

I thought I saw you the other day.

The butterfly feeling, giggling, and even the electric-connection thingy. I felt them all. But it's not for long. The one I saw the other day just walked away without bothering to glance at me.

It's not you. It can't be you, right?

You're sweet. You're a gift from God that will make people feel better and make their worries non-existing, right?

I know I can't rely on directions to know where you are. I can't ride on an airplane or bus to get to you.You're like a treasure that is hunted by many, but you're a treasure without a map.

But please, Love, let me find you.

I will try not to give up, but please let me find you before I get too tired.

If you want, you can come anytime. My door's not widely open though, so please knock down the door instead.

Will wait for you always,

             Me <3

Author's Note

I have so much to say, to the point that I couldn't say anything.
Love, what more can I say?

Reviews

[zach h.]

So few words, so much said. A great quality to have as a writer. Sometimes I wish I had more of it. I seem to never know how to express things simply and convey as much depth as you do in so little words. There is openness, depth, passion, and understanding in your writing and that is amazing. I've seen some great works from you. Keep writing please!

[SimpleMind]

Thank you so much my friend. :)

[Holly Mason]

this is a very good piece of work...
very creative and details vivid
I like that you are not throwing yourself but rather behind a door that needs to be beaten down...letting them know it will be worth it*)
thank you so for sharing

[SimpleMind]

Thanks for the kind review :)

I owe this to my friend Shazza. She made me realize that I am worth something. Really, thanks again :)

[Holly Mason]

that is exactly what I read a girl who thinks she is worth something and that is the best way to be...what a good friend treasure you have...*)

[Ahmad Cox]

Its amazing how it can creep up on you sometimes.

[SimpleMind]

I guess that's what they call 'magic' XD

Really, thanks for reading :)

[Frieda P]

Very sweet read, they say you can't go looking for love, it just happens.

'If you want, you can come anytime. My door's not widely open though, so please knock down the door instead.'

Ha, you're looking for gangbusters kind of love here! Aren't we all? Good one.

[SimpleMind]

:) Yes, we all do. It's somewhat cool and worth reminiscing for. Thanks Frie, what you said brought smile on my face :)

[Frieda P]

So happy that it did, and my pleasure.... :-)

[Mike Emil]

too old to remember love

[SimpleMind]

I don't remember love having age though :)

[Mike Emil]

alright, good comeback, but i was languishing in rhetoric, simpleminded

[SimpleMind]

Oh~ ....I didn't know XD

[Geon Quuin]

You have the address. Just freaking go there.

[SimpleMind]

LOL~ I don't have it XD

[Zap-the-awesome]

I love it. It's almost a reflection of some of my own thoughts. Very good

[SimpleMind]

Thanks Zap! :) I'm glad you like it :}

[Shannen Forrester]

Wow, I can't believe how well you captured it... So, so good, I... there is no text!!! Damn I cant express how perfect this is over the internet!!!
I love the style you presented it in, I love everything!
Just brilliant :)

[SimpleMind]

This poem won't be here without you Shan, thanks for inspiring me :)
I hope I will find mine, maybe not the way you did, but as long as I will find it.

[Shannen Forrester]

AHHH no dont call me Shan, no never!!!
Shazza for short please :)
Sorry it's a personal peeve, I got tortured with that in school *shudder*
But you are more than welcome and I'm glad I can inspire great poetry in others XD

[SimpleMind]

Ohw..sorry XD haha i thought 'Shan' sounds cute .. :)

Thanks Shazza, you're a great person! :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Love it! you wrote it perfectly :)

[SimpleMind]

Thanks Marc,..kind as always :)