Letter (Please listen to the video while reading)

Letter (Please listen to the video while reading)

A Poem by SimpleMind
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They say wait for it, but what if it mistakenly forgot you?

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Dear Love,
I thought I saw you the other day.

The butterfly feeling, giggling, and even the electric-connection thingy. I felt them all. But it's not for long. The one I saw the other day just walked away without bothering to glance at me.

It's not you. It can't be you, right?

You're sweet. You're a gift from God that will make people feel better and make their worries non-existing, right?

I know I can't rely on directions to know where you are. I can't ride on an airplane or bus to get to you.You're like a treasure that is hunted by many, but you're a treasure without a map.

But please, Love, let me find you.

I will try not to give up, but please let me find you before I get too tired.

If you want, you can come anytime. My door's not widely open though, so please knock down the door instead.
Will wait for you always,
             Me <3



© 2013 SimpleMind


Author's Note

SimpleMind



I have so much to say, to the point that I couldn't say anything.
Love, what more can I say?

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So few words, so much said. A great quality to have as a writer. Sometimes I wish I had more of it. I seem to never know how to express things simply and convey as much depth as you do in so little words. There is openness, depth, passion, and understanding in your writing and that is amazing. I've seen some great works from you. Keep writing please!

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend. :)
this is a very good piece of work...
very creative and details vivid
I like that you are not throwing yourself but rather behind a door that needs to be beaten down...letting them know it will be worth it*)
thank you so for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind review :)

I owe this to my friend Shazza. She made me realize that .. read more
Holly Mason

6 Years Ago

that is exactly what I read a girl who thinks she is worth something and that is the best way to be... read more
Its amazing how it can creep up on you sometimes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

I guess that's what they call 'magic' XD

Really, thanks for reading :)
Very sweet read, they say you can't go looking for love, it just happens.

'If you want, you can come anytime. My door's not widely open though, so please knock down the door instead.'

Ha, you're looking for gangbusters kind of love here! Aren't we all? Good one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

:) Yes, we all do. It's somewhat cool and worth reminiscing for. Thanks Frie, what you said brought .. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So happy that it did, and my pleasure.... :-)
too old to remember love

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

I don't remember love having age though :)
Mike Emil

6 Years Ago

alright, good comeback, but i was languishing in rhetoric, simpleminded
SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Oh~ ....I didn't know XD
You have the address. Just freaking go there.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

LOL~ I don't have it XD
I love it. It's almost a reflection of some of my own thoughts. Very good

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Thanks Zap! :) I'm glad you like it :}
Wow, I can't believe how well you captured it... So, so good, I... there is no text!!! Damn I cant express how perfect this is over the internet!!!
I love the style you presented it in, I love everything!
Just brilliant :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

This poem won't be here without you Shan, thanks for inspiring me :)
I hope I will find mine, .. read more
Shannen Forrester

6 Years Ago

AHHH no dont call me Shan, no never!!!
Shazza for short please :)
Sorry it's a persona.. read more
SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Ohw..sorry XD haha i thought 'Shan' sounds cute .. :)

Thanks Shazza, you're a great per.. read more
Love it! you wrote it perfectly :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


SimpleMind

6 Years Ago

Thanks Marc,..kind as always :)

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